Nice
I liked the style, very film noir, the "movie scratches" should have been more random though, and not so much like worms. Would have like just one more vowel syllable in the speech patterns to switch it up a little, but overall, great man.
Nice
I liked the style, very film noir, the "movie scratches" should have been more random though, and not so much like worms. Would have like just one more vowel syllable in the speech patterns to switch it up a little, but overall, great man.
Thanks a lot for the positive review
It has promise
I liked the intro, it just lacked the narraration, graphics and, sound to carry the idea through but could be good.
Thanks, I like the intro myself. :-)
Yeah, I'm sure I could do a better job on the narration. Or at least get someone else to do it.
Graphics and sound will improve with experience (hopefully) as well as time and effort. :-D
Thanks for the review!
;K'
Age 39, Male
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Joined on 3/19/07